Starting a New Line/Brand Feedback Thread

Oct 04, 2012 @ 18:51
@mobbyluii
You're welcome man! msg the link once it goes up!

And I'll fix that too, appreciate the help man!

SHOP: http://www.apollolifestyle.bigcartel.com FACEBOOK: http://www.facebook.com/apollolifestyle

Oct 04, 2012 @ 18:55
Here's my brand's script logo. I'm sure many will shit on it, but I'm interested to hear some feedback; positive and negative.

Oct 04, 2012 @ 18:58
Here's my brand's script logo. I'm sure many will shit on it, but I'm interested to hear some feedback; positive and negative.



I like it, what's the pattern/texture in the back though? I feel like it should be more defined

SHOP: http://www.apollolifestyle.bigcartel.com FACEBOOK: http://www.facebook.com/apollolifestyle

Oct 04, 2012 @ 18:59
Here we go:

as influenced by @mobbyluii


Then the olive branch:


The the plain:
http://static.tumblr.com/ayalaughing0f/IyIm9utjk/untitled-1.jpg

Let me know what you think!



TBH, its not very original. star, leaf, crown are all kinda corny right now. A logo should be more simple and represent your brand
Oct 04, 2012 @ 19:04
@apollolifestyle thanks alot man. This particular rendering of the logo has shredded money running through the letters as a texture.

I completely agree with you though, this one is somewhat busy and less defined. We do use a plain black and white version on our hem tags and on some t's though.
Oct 04, 2012 @ 19:14
Here we go:

as influenced by @mobbyluii


Then the olive branch:


The the plain:
http://static.tumblr.com/ayalaughing0f/IyIm9utjk/untitled-1.jpg

Let me know what you think!


This Logo sucks. There's too much (crown, star, alot of text), it's not simple enough. The font of the text clashes with the "olive branch" and it's not cohesive. The "olive branch" seems very unoriginal...so it doesn't separate your brand from other brands and it doesn't help give your brand an identity. But the main problem is that the "AL" font and the olive branch don't really go well together.

@illthrill_Myles

Oct 04, 2012 @ 19:21
@southshorematt

no problem man,I feel you. You try any other textures? Dope logo though

@craftysince90

what about this:

SHOP: http://www.apollolifestyle.bigcartel.com FACEBOOK: http://www.facebook.com/apollolifestyle

Oct 04, 2012 @ 19:23
@mylesb

This Logo sucks. There's too much (crown, star, alot of text), it's not simple enough. The font of the text clashes with the "olive branch" and it's not cohesive. The "olive branch" seems very unoriginal...so it doesn't separate your brand from other brands and it doesn't help give your brand an identity. But the main problem is that the "AL" font and the olive branch don't really go well together.


what about the one I just posted?

SHOP: http://www.apollolifestyle.bigcartel.com FACEBOOK: http://www.facebook.com/apollolifestyle

Oct 04, 2012 @ 19:27
Its already more creative than the last
Oct 04, 2012 @ 19:29
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Oct 04, 2012 @ 19:31
makin moves....




can you post a better picture.... i like what i "kinda" see. lol

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Oct 04, 2012 @ 19:32
Oct 04, 2012 @ 20:16
@southshorematt

no problem man,I feel you. You try any other textures? Dope logo though

@craftysince90

what about this:


I would simplify it even more possibly turning the rocket into a silhouette for any 1 color prints. It's not a bad idea to expand on though.



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Oct 04, 2012 @ 20:22
So here's the lookbook for the first Fall '12 drop from STANDARDZ®.
The "Basics" Pack includes a tee: $20 / Crewneck: $30 / Hoodie: $35 -- limited quantities | no reprints.
Available online this coming Wednesday (10.10.12) !

The lookbook itself was shot in film, which I feel captures the chill essence of Virginia pretty thoroughly.
Decided to use both a girl & boy to show how each piece can be pulled off regardless of gender.

Check it out in full here: http://standardzzz.com/fall-2012-basics.html
Fan page: http://facebook.com/StandardzVa
Instagram & Twitter: @StandardzVA









Let me know whassup~

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Oct 04, 2012 @ 20:39
So here's the lookbook for the first Fall '12 drop from STANDARDZ®.
The "Basics" Pack includes a tee: $20 / Crewneck: $30 / Hoodie: $35 -- limited quantities | no reprints.
Available online this coming Wednesday (10.10.12) !

The lookbook itself was shot in film, which I feel captures the chill essence of Virginia pretty thoroughly.
Decided to use both a girl & boy to show how each piece can be pulled off regardless of gender.

Check it out in full here: http://standardzzz.com/fall-2012-basics.html
Fan page: http://facebook.com/StandardzVa
Instagram & Twitter: @StandardzVA









Let me know whassup~


I like this. The brand looks like it's off to a good start...looking forward to seeing how it expands

@illthrill_Myles

Oct 04, 2012 @ 20:46
Mystic Sons Shirt templates > 100 % Grey Lambs Wool

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Link
Oct 04, 2012 @ 20:52
@mylesb much appreciated dude

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Oct 04, 2012 @ 21:00

Glow In The Dark Jagan Eyes buttons

http://www.dangerers.bigcartel.com

Oct 04, 2012 @ 21:04
@angelooo that back print is too clean

http://www.dangerers.bigcartel.com

Oct 04, 2012 @ 21:09
@dangerers thanks man! but those buttons...smokeyface

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Oct 04, 2012 @ 22:01
@southshorematt

no problem man,I feel you. You try any other textures? Dope logo though

@craftysince90

what about this:


I would simplify it even more possibly turning the rocket into a silhouette for any 1 color prints. It's not a bad idea to expand on though.



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Working on that for the one colors, might change the placement of the rocket too, thank you very much for the feedback!
ps. dope line, great concepts and prints

SHOP: http://www.apollolifestyle.bigcartel.com FACEBOOK: http://www.facebook.com/apollolifestyle

Oct 04, 2012 @ 22:14


I would simplify it even more possibly turning the rocket into a silhouette for any 1 color prints. It's not a bad idea to expand on though.



R-1 AO 1 20
49° 15′N 123° 6W
FMC – 18201006
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Facebook 
instagram @rare1



Working on that for the one colors, might change the placement of the rocket too, thank you very much for the feedback!
ps. dope line, great concepts and prints


I would get rid of the circle.
Oct 05, 2012 @ 01:20
Hey guys to get a perspective, What programs do you guys do when designing? Photoshop? GLooks in advanced
Oct 05, 2012 @ 01:35
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Oct 05, 2012 @ 01:37
Originally posted by Inactive User
@rsomers6 I usually do graphics for bands and shit, but often I'll paint/draw in photoshop, often over a picture I drew in pen and scanned. Or for like logo designs and patters you can use Illustrator which is also made by Adobe

always use at least 300 dpi when doing these designs so they look nice printed!


Thanks man Ima DL Illustrator
Oct 05, 2012 @ 02:24
Hey guys to get a perspective, What programs do you guys do when designing? Photoshop? GLooks in advanced

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Yo, I really don't F wit these designs.

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Oct 05, 2012 @ 02:43
Hey guys to get a perspective, What programs do you guys do when designing? Photoshop? GLooks in advanced

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Yo, I really don't F wit these designs.
Hey guys to get a perspective, What programs do you guys do when designing? Photoshop? GLooks in advanced

google.com
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Yo, I really don't F wit these designs.


What changes should I make .. ?
Oct 05, 2012 @ 08:54
Just looking for somebodies opinion on big cartel stores.
I prefer not to use big cartel because everyone is doing it but I don't know if people who are currently using it find an increase in web sales?
Is it because of how easy it is to select your product, checkout with minimal address and card forms to fill out?
I use an online store built into my website and would appreciate any feedback on it?

www.strdywngs.com

thanks

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Oct 05, 2012 @ 11:52
Originally posted by Inactive User
i remember when all over print was hot....everybody made all over print...no big deal. customers bought.
i remember when hounds-tooth pattern was hot....everybody made hounds-tooth print...no big deal. customers bought.
fitteds.....
snapbacks...
selvage denim jeans...
bandanas..
polka dots..
native American print...


something becomes a trend..all the brands incorporate it into the line....


There is a difference between starting a trend and following & running a trend to the ground.


ive seen at least 20 lookbooks this season with native American print.

which brand is the trend setter?...im assuming the other 19 run it in the ground?

does the customer only want product for the brand who started the trend?......if so, alot of those brand got the game all wrong! ......................................................or maybe we have it wrong.
Oct 05, 2012 @ 12:03
Just looking for somebodies opinion on big cartel stores.
I prefer not to use big cartel because everyone is doing it but I don't know if people who are currently using it find an increase in web sales?
Is it because of how easy it is to select your product, checkout with minimal address and card forms to fill out?
I use an online store built into my website and would appreciate any feedback on it?

www.strdywngs.com

thanks


i don't understand....you don't want to use bigcartel, because everyone uses it?

If they are the #1 webstore with easy setup, payment options, 1000's of templates and customization options, great customer service and inventory set up and tracking, and pretty good traffic reports.........
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