Starting a New Line/Brand Feedback Thread

Oct 04, 2012 @ 02:38
Peep our promo for "Crispy Apparel X Jtu X Koi aesthetics"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M2WMx9iTbVU


Too many ollies down 3 stairs, I lost interest. Might want to pick up some better riders.

http://thedividedminds.com/

Oct 04, 2012 @ 02:52
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Looking for some feedback.
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Oct 04, 2012 @ 03:11
Peep our promo for "Crispy Apparel X Jtu X Koi aesthetics"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M2WMx9iTbVU

Honestly, it sucks. If I saw nothing about your comment on the video, I would not have know that it was a promo for your brand, much less a promo for a collab at that. In fact all it seems to be to me is a montage comprised of bad filming, bad skating, and bad editing (not at all saying I could do better so don't try to come at me from that perspective). Overall it just seems pointless, uninteresting and poorly executed.
Sorry in advance for the harsh words.

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Oct 04, 2012 @ 03:58
Peep our promo for "Crispy Apparel X Jtu X Koi aesthetics"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M2WMx9iTbVU

Honestly, it sucks. If I saw nothing about your comment on the video, I would not have know that it was a promo for your brand, much less a promo for a collab at that. In fact all it seems to be to me is a montage comprised of bad filming, bad skating, and bad editing (not at all saying I could do better so don't try to come at me from that perspective). Overall it just seems pointless, uninteresting and poorly executed.
Sorry in advance for the harsh words.

Its just the "Jaycrispy" in general, i guess.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fqdNLAenux8
Oct 04, 2012 @ 04:02
But i guess these ones probably make more sense.





Thanks for the feedback tho guys. Appreciate it.
Oct 04, 2012 @ 04:24
Videos like this are dope. Really just need better people riding for your brand. Build a team since you are skate related. @crispy1





http://thedividedminds.com/

Oct 04, 2012 @ 05:10
It's cool that everyone critiques each other; that's needed for improvement. But you gotta be more positive with eachother. I'm sure everyone wants to eventually be a big brand and we all have aspirations to live off of this stuff. But look the truth is we're all kids saving up our money to print t-shirts and sell to mostly our friends. We're all in the same boat, to me this is like it's own culture within a culture if that makes sense. Just be positive and push good vibes, I have hella respect for these crispy kids right here. Just having fun, making dope stuff and actually enjoying it. Good shit lil' niggas.
Oct 04, 2012 @ 05:55
amazing

This is all cool as f***, big stuff



that cap is really cool
Oct 04, 2012 @ 06:14
all these brands suck haha.... most is cheap quality too i understand yall on the come up but damn. the only good small brands out now are deathprecisioninc/divinties/dertbag/freedminds/strayrats

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Oct 04, 2012 @ 06:20
Peep our promo for "Crispy Apparel X Jtu X Koi aesthetics"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M2WMx9iTbVU

Honestly, it sucks. If I saw nothing about your comment on the video, I would not have know that it was a promo for your brand, much less a promo for a collab at that. In fact all it seems to be to me is a montage comprised of bad filming, bad skating, and bad editing (not at all saying I could do better so don't try to come at me from that perspective). Overall it just seems pointless, uninteresting and poorly executed.
Sorry in advance for the harsh words.


Pretty much took the words out my mouth lol

@illthrill_Myles

Oct 04, 2012 @ 06:22
Keep a Look out!


I had a hard time reading the text

@illthrill_Myles

Oct 04, 2012 @ 07:28
Oct 04, 2012 @ 08:23
Keep a Look out!


I had a hard time reading the text

me too

City of Savages Clothing http://shop.thecityofsavages.com "Live Free or Die"

Oct 04, 2012 @ 08:26
@craftysince90 the HH w/ the claw marks looks good, have you considred making it slightly larger on the shirt that isn't a pocket tee?

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Oct 04, 2012 @ 10:45



The design as a whole doesn't look too bad, but the black leg on the tiger is kinda weird

@illthrill_Myles

Oct 04, 2012 @ 13:55
Originally posted by Inactive User
all these brands suck haha.... most is cheap quality too i understand yall on the come up but damn. the only good small brands out now are deathprecisioninc/divinties/dertbag/freedminds/strayrats



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Oct 04, 2012 @ 15:06
How many of y'all have some of your production offshore whether its cut and sew or regular tees? Obviously the price is better but I was just wondering what your thoughts are in terms of quality, turnaround time, and other stuff. And for any of you that do use offshore production how many of you have actulaly went and visited the plant where your product is made?
Oct 04, 2012 @ 16:19


I was wondering if you had any feedback on this logo/ should we change some things on it,etc.
Any feedback is appreciated!

SHOP: http://www.apollolifestyle.bigcartel.com FACEBOOK: http://www.facebook.com/apollolifestyle

Oct 04, 2012 @ 16:37


I was wondering if you had any feedback on this logo/ should we change some things on it,etc.
Any feedback is appreciated!


Thats pretty dope, the only thing I'd say is move the AL and stuff up a little bit looks like its a little too low. but still dope.
Oct 04, 2012 @ 16:41
Has anybody ever thought about getting toys made? I know this has nothing to do with starting a clothing line, but it's something I seriously have been considering.

"I keep myself so lifted I'm accustom to new heights."

Oct 04, 2012 @ 16:47
Originally posted by Inactive User
all these brands suck haha.... most is cheap quality too i understand yall on the come up but damn. the only good small brands out now are deathprecisioninc/divinties/dertbag/freedminds/strayrats


Sounds like something a stereotypical hypebeast would say. Although the brands you listed are great brands, there are currently a variety of other quality small brands on the market amongst the shitstorm of terrible ones. Obviously you have not done your research.

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Oct 04, 2012 @ 17:43
makin moves....


IG: @luii.xx

Oct 04, 2012 @ 17:48


I was wondering if you had any feedback on this logo/ should we change some things on it,etc.
Any feedback is appreciated!


Thats pretty dope, the only thing I'd say is move the AL and stuff up a little bit looks like its a little too low. but still dope.


Alright, I'll fix that. Really appreciate the feedback!!
Quick question: Should we keep the crown or change it so it's 3 points instead of 4?

SHOP: http://www.apollolifestyle.bigcartel.com FACEBOOK: http://www.facebook.com/apollolifestyle

Oct 04, 2012 @ 17:53


Thats pretty dope, the only thing I'd say is move the AL and stuff up a little bit looks like its a little too low. but still dope.


Alright, I'll fix that. Really appreciate the feedback!!
Quick question: Should we keep the crown or change it so it's 3 points instead of 4?

to be honest, id stay away from the olive leaf logo and the "est. MMXII" and all that roman numeral stuff. Alotta people have thrown that on shirts...

I like the logo, but if you want to stand out, id say stay away from those 2 things

IG: @luii.xx

Oct 04, 2012 @ 17:57
@mobbyluii

Yeah, that's something to consider. We did it without the olive leaf and est MMXII , but it felt too plain. But then again simplicity is best, right?
How would you feel if we changed the wreath to an emblem type design, like a circle around it?

SHOP: http://www.apollolifestyle.bigcartel.com FACEBOOK: http://www.facebook.com/apollolifestyle

Oct 04, 2012 @ 17:58
makin moves....



this your brand? I like it man

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Oct 04, 2012 @ 18:06
@mobbyluii

Yeah, that's something to consider. We did it without the olive leaf and est MMXII , but it felt too plain. But then again simplicity is best, right?
How would you feel if we changed the wreath to an emblem type design, like a circle around it?
yeah simplicity is best

and id sample it with a circle around it and post the original and the new one and get some feedback on which one targets your customers better.. try it it out tho and post em here bro!

makin moves....



this your brand? I like it man

yup its something ive been working on for 4 years and finally have the money to go into production... dont sleep on the previews ill be posting in the next coming weeks.

IG: @luii.xx

Oct 04, 2012 @ 18:35
Here we go:

as influenced by @mobbyluii


Then the olive branch:


The the plain:
http://static.tumblr.com/ayalaughing0f/IyIm9utjk/untitled-1.jpg

Let me know what you think!

SHOP: http://www.apollolifestyle.bigcartel.com FACEBOOK: http://www.facebook.com/apollolifestyle

Oct 04, 2012 @ 18:36
@mobbyluii

I can't wait to see what you have coming out, great that you're able to drop it

SHOP: http://www.apollolifestyle.bigcartel.com FACEBOOK: http://www.facebook.com/apollolifestyle

Oct 04, 2012 @ 18:43
Here we go:

as influenced by @mobbyluii


Then the olive branch:


The the plain:
http://static.tumblr.com/ayalaughing0f/IyIm9utjk/untitled-1.jpg

Let me know what you think!

I like that, try and make the circle a bit thicker and see how that looks!
@mobbyluii

I can't wait to see what you have coming out, great that you're able to drop it

thanks bro!

IG: @luii.xx

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