Starting a New Line/Brand Feedback Thread

its 620am and i havent slept yet. care to give some feedback?

Yeah man, you definitely need to blow the print up a bit. The concept isn't very original, but the piece was executed well. I think you should rework the antenna though. It looks cartoonish and it doesn't fit well the rest of the elements in the piece.

I agree and I say branding overkill, get that commonly used away from the TV, you've already branded the sleeve, the piece would be stronger without it.

^^Tees are dope!

@blastoffline small world I used to do mixtape covers for YD and the whole moola gang years back

Our Brand Is Launched " Blast Off Clothing "
We are located in Pittsburgh Pa, our web is www.blastoffline.com

Here is a few products that we have!
Enjoy and leave feedback!
This is our first t-shirt that we dropped.


We came up with a Logo, and then supplied that onto a shirt


For 420 arriving fast, we supplied the "420'ers" a dope tee!


Summer coming around, we released a summer tank.


For the "flag" trip being big, we created a unique twist to it!


Enjoy!

Here is my brand.

Uptown Alliance is a clothing company founded in 2011 in Philadelphia. Its main goal is to bring dope designs that inspire the public to follow their passions and create their own destiny. Uptown Alliance started out as a senior project in High School and developed into a clothing line the summer after my senior year. The motto of the line is "Passion Takes You Higher", which comes from the idea that you can only give your all if you love what you do. So the motto stands for doing what you're passionate about and using that to reach your aspirations. Also another idea that the line stands for is take a step everyday towards what you want because you can build your dreams one day at a time.

Please check out the Fall 2011 photoshoot on the blog as well as the online store and the Facebook page.

Fall 2011 Photoshoot
Blog
Online Store
Facebook Page

Let me know what you think. Thanks.

good start, but the bigcartel page annoys me. it's set up sort of a like a tumblr, and it looks disorganized.
one other thing that sort of bugs me is the for the product shots, you used the lookbook. imo it looks better when all product shots are coherent to eachother, and the lookbook is showed seperately.
you might want to invest into building a more structured website. if i were to go on your website, i would think it's a blog, not a clothing brand. building a website with more tabs and content gives the consumer more of a reason to stay on your website and helps with seo.
otherwise, good start, and good luck.

Here is my brand.

Uptown Alliance is a clothing company founded in 2011 in Philadelphia. Its main goal is to bring dope designs that inspire the public to follow their passions and create their own destiny. Uptown Alliance started out as a senior project in High School and developed into a clothing line the summer after my senior year. The motto of the line is "Passion Takes You Higher", which comes from the idea that you can only give your all if you love what you do. So the motto stands for doing what you're passionate about and using that to reach your aspirations. Also another idea that the line stands for is take a step everyday towards what you want because you can build your dreams one day at a time.

Please check out the Fall 2011 photoshoot on the blog as well as the online store and the Facebook page.

Fall 2011 Photoshoot
Blog
Online Store
Facebook Page

Let me know what you think. Thanks.

good start, but the bigcartel page annoys me. it's set up sort of a like a tumblr, and it looks disorganized.
one other thing that sort of bugs me is the for the product shots, you used the lookbook. imo it looks better when all product shots are coherent to eachother, and the lookbook is showed seperately.
you might want to invest into building a more structured website. if i were to go on your website, i would think it's a blog, not a clothing brand. building a website with more tabs and content gives the consumer more of a reason to stay on your website and helps with seo.
otherwise, good start, and good luck.

Thanks for your feedback. I am actually thinking about changing the website from bigcartel. I also understand what you are saying about the separating the lookbook and the product shots and ill take that in consideration. Anybody else have any comments? Good or bad. Let me know what you think.

Fall 2011 Photoshoot
online store
blog
Give the Facebook page a like

Here is my brand.

Uptown Alliance is a clothing company founded in 2011 in Philadelphia. Its main goal is to bring dope designs that inspire the public to follow their passions and create their own destiny. Uptown Alliance started out as a senior project in High School and developed into a clothing line the summer after my senior year. The motto of the line is "Passion Takes You Higher", which comes from the idea that you can only give your all if you love what you do. So the motto stands for doing what you're passionate about and using that to reach your aspirations. Also another idea that the line stands for is take a step everyday towards what you want because you can build your dreams one day at a time.

Please check out the Fall 2011 photoshoot on the blog as well as the online store and the Facebook page.

Fall 2011 Photoshoot
Blog
Online Store
Facebook Page

Let me know what you think. Thanks.

good start, but the bigcartel page annoys me. it's set up sort of a like a tumblr, and it looks disorganized.
one other thing that sort of bugs me is the for the product shots, you used the lookbook. imo it looks better when all product shots are coherent to eachother, and the lookbook is showed seperately.
you might want to invest into building a more structured website. if i were to go on your website, i would think it's a blog, not a clothing brand. building a website with more tabs and content gives the consumer more of a reason to stay on your website and helps with seo.
otherwise, good start, and good luck.

Thanks for your feedback. I am actually thinking about changing the website from bigcartel. I also understand what you are saying about the separating the lookbook and the product shots and ill take that in consideration. Anybody else have any comments? Good or bad. Let me know what you think.

Fall 2011 Photoshoot
online store
blog
Give the Facebook page a like

I cant open any of your links