What's goin on everybody? I've recently released my new brand called SleepingELFNT. Can I get everyones feedback about my summer line? Good or bad! Rip my shit apart if you want to. All input will be good for my company. Peace!
This seems really cool as a whole but just some things that jumped out at me that I thought I would mention:
I think the concept of the tee in the third and fourth tee is dope, awesome idea its just hard to see at first being all close up.
On the second tee, the words 'PICKIN THE LOCK COMIN THROUGH THE DOOR BLASTIN' make no sense to me; what does that have to do with the idea behind the brand or the name?
Third tee, from seeing it, I don't get the word JUGGERNAUTS from JGRNTS. I honestly think the abbreviation thing in streetwear now is stupid and often makes no sense. Once again, what does juggernauts have to do with the idea behind your brand or name.
Fifth tee, I actually really dig your logo, thats dope.
Sixth picture, I have nothing to say about the tank, its simple and to the point the only thing is that I would shy away from using other brands' products in your lookbook, I think you want to draw as much attention to your product rather than others'.
One more thing I noticed is that all the tees are monochrome. If thats what you are into and you don't like color and want to appeal to an audience that has the same style, thats cool. Just me though, I personally like to have more variety in products and a good amount to choose from.
Again, looks like a good start. Hope the advice helps!