Starting a New Line/Brand Feedback Thread

Jul 06, 2012 @ 23:53
^I think its also designed so that it reads EVIL when put backwards

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Jul 07, 2012 @ 00:18
What's goin on everybody? I've recently released my new brand called SleepingELFNT. Can I get everyones feedback about my summer line? Good or bad! Rip my shit apart if you want to. All input will be good for my company. Peace!



2012 SUMMER COLLECTION


HUNGER PANGS


JUGGERNAUTS


ART OF WAR


ELFNTFACE


WHATEVER IT TAKES TANK



www.ELFNTFACE.com

Jul 07, 2012 @ 00:23
Will you drop some numbers as far as percent?

Kazbah takes 35% and you have to pay $30 a month for "rent"


lol im not making anything selling on karmaloop because in addition to all of these things mentioned, they offer free shipping that you have to cover as well as promo rep discounts that are counted against you as well. I actually only make 1-2$ per shirt but at the moment i am getting a ton of sales so its kind of annoying. I dont want to mark up my shirts and not have them sell but at the same time im not really making anything. bah..

http://www.cakestar.com

Jul 07, 2012 @ 02:05
What's goin on everybody? I've recently released my new brand called SleepingELFNT. Can I get everyones feedback about my summer line? Good or bad! Rip my shit apart if you want to. All input will be good for my company. Peace!

This seems really cool as a whole but just some things that jumped out at me that I thought I would mention:
I think the concept of the tee in the third and fourth tee is dope, awesome idea its just hard to see at first being all close up.
On the second tee, the words 'PICKIN THE LOCK COMIN THROUGH THE DOOR BLASTIN' make no sense to me; what does that have to do with the idea behind the brand or the name?
Third tee, from seeing it, I don't get the word JUGGERNAUTS from JGRNTS. I honestly think the abbreviation thing in streetwear now is stupid and often makes no sense. Once again, what does juggernauts have to do with the idea behind your brand or name.
Fifth tee, I actually really dig your logo, thats dope.
Sixth picture, I have nothing to say about the tank, its simple and to the point the only thing is that I would shy away from using other brands' products in your lookbook, I think you want to draw as much attention to your product rather than others'.
One more thing I noticed is that all the tees are monochrome. If thats what you are into and you don't like color and want to appeal to an audience that has the same style, thats cool. Just me though, I personally like to have more variety in products and a good amount to choose from.
Again, looks like a good start. Hope the advice helps!

chadacadabra.tumblr.com

Jul 07, 2012 @ 02:48
What's goin on everybody? I've recently released my new brand called SleepingELFNT. Can I get everyones feedback about my summer line? Good or bad! Rip my shit apart if you want to. All input will be good for my company. Peace!

This seems really cool as a whole but just some things that jumped out at me that I thought I would mention:
I think the concept of the tee in the third and fourth tee is dope, awesome idea its just hard to see at first being all close up.
On the second tee, the words 'PICKIN THE LOCK COMIN THROUGH THE DOOR BLASTIN' make no sense to me; what does that have to do with the idea behind the brand or the name?
Third tee, from seeing it, I don't get the word JUGGERNAUTS from JGRNTS. I honestly think the abbreviation thing in streetwear now is stupid and often makes no sense. Once again, what does juggernauts have to do with the idea behind your brand or name.
Fifth tee, I actually really dig your logo, thats dope.
Sixth picture, I have nothing to say about the tank, its simple and to the point the only thing is that I would shy away from using other brands' products in your lookbook, I think you want to draw as much attention to your product rather than others'.
One more thing I noticed is that all the tees are monochrome. If thats what you are into and you don't like color and want to appeal to an audience that has the same style, thats cool. Just me though, I personally like to have more variety in products and a good amount to choose from.
Again, looks like a good start. Hope the advice helps!


Thank you, sir! I appreciate the feedback. Just to clear things up, my line is about having a Juggernaut mentality. It's about doing whatever it takes to get things done and overcoming any obstacle thats in my path. That is the reason for the "Juggernauts" tee. And the abbreviation of the word comes from my graffiti background. Abbreviating words the way I did with "juggernauts" did not start in street wear. The "Hunger Pangs" tee is an inspiring quote from 2pac. It doesn't really mean exactly what it says. It's metaphorical.

www.ELFNTFACE.com

Jul 07, 2012 @ 13:06
^^ then maybe you should had named the brand "juggernauts".

The moment I hear "a sleeping elephant" I think of dumbo for some reason... Just my worthless .02$

www.highwaysco.us -- for some fucking reason, you must use the www. idk why fml.

Jul 07, 2012 @ 14:53
whats a good way to start a website I know there is go daddy, and big cartel but I rather not use bg.
Jul 07, 2012 @ 14:54
I just started a brand called Recruits. We just launched yesterday. Give some feedback and etc
www.recruitsclothing.com

Not too bad. Looks like a good start!

how did you make your website?
Jul 07, 2012 @ 17:17


having a sale guys check it out!

www.ronindivision.com

Jul 07, 2012 @ 19:56


Appalled-US.com
Jul 07, 2012 @ 21:19
yeah when
What's goin on everybody? I've recently released my new brand called SleepingELFNT. Can I get everyones feedback about my summer line? Good or bad! Rip my shit apart if you want to. All input will be good for my company. Peace!



2012 SUMMER COLLECTION


HUNGER PANGS


JUGGERNAUTS


ART OF WAR


ELFNTFACE


WHATEVER IT TAKES TANK




Everything seems cool except for "Picking the lock comin through the door blasting" tee so many brands put quotes like that on their shirts w/ the quotes really tying into the brand's identity. Also like someone already mentioned there is no need for the Starter cap to be in the lookbook if it isn't one of your products and lastly I feel like the watermark is too big on the pics with the double model view maybe if you shrunk it down and put it in between the model's head it would be better and less distracting. Overall it's a good start.

City of Savages Clothing http://shop.thecityofsavages.com "Live Free or Die"

Jul 07, 2012 @ 22:02
what up everyone, i've been brainstorming and everything has been going along well. I haven't been posting up anything lately about it but i'll be dropping something real soon (Blades of Glory) which is going in production next week. Keep an eye out, i'll be posting up sneak peaks.

Anyway, for now I am dropping exclusive 'cmlyud' cavnas beanies in black or maroon. would love to hear what you guys think. You could order yours on the website here: http://commonlyused.bigcartel.com/product/cmlyud-canvas-beanies




Away From Society | San Jose, CA | www.cmnlyud.com

Jul 07, 2012 @ 22:08
^^^ maybe once November comes around man. It's the hottest month since '88 here in Ohio...

www.highwaysco.us -- for some fucking reason, you must use the www. idk why fml.

Jul 07, 2012 @ 22:17
what up everyone, i've been brainstorming and everything has been going along well. I haven't been posting up anything lately about it but i'll be dropping something real soon (Blades of Glory) which is going in production next week. Keep an eye out, i'll be posting up sneak peaks.

Anyway, for now I am dropping exclusive 'cmlyud' cavnas beanies in black or maroon. would love to hear what you guys think. You could order yours on the website here: http://commonlyused.bigcartel.com/product/cmlyud-canvas-beanies





They look great, I like distressed edges, the only issue is that the script isn't really legible you may have issues moving them if people can't really read what they say. Be sure to include a good product description on your site explaining what 'Cmlyud' represents so people will be more inclined to purchase.

City of Savages Clothing http://shop.thecityofsavages.com "Live Free or Die"

Jul 07, 2012 @ 23:07
what up everyone, i've been brainstorming and everything has been going along well. I haven't been posting up anything lately about it but i'll be dropping something real soon (Blades of Glory) which is going in production next week. Keep an eye out, i'll be posting up sneak peaks.

Anyway, for now I am dropping exclusive 'cmlyud' cavnas beanies in black or maroon. would love to hear what you guys think. You could order yours on the website here: http://commonlyused.bigcartel.com/product/cmlyud-canvas-beanies





They look great, I like distressed edges, the only issue is that the script isn't really legible you may have issues moving them if people can't really read what they say. Be sure to include a good product description on your site explaining what 'Cmlyud' represents so people will be more inclined to purchase.


thanks! will keep that in mind. 'cmlyud' is an abbreviation for Commonly Used

Away From Society | San Jose, CA | www.cmnlyud.com

Jul 07, 2012 @ 23:13
^I think its also designed so that it reads EVIL when put backwards


Yurrp that's the double meaning there! Thanks for recognizing

God Hates Lames

Jul 08, 2012 @ 00:41
nvm

http://www.dangerers.bigcartel.com

Jul 08, 2012 @ 00:45

looking for feedback whether it be good or bad
You need a better tee template, if you want I can send you one, its a jpeg though so you gotta put your logo on overlay/multiply but it looks much better than that.

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Jul 08, 2012 @ 01:05
Is it just me or does anyone else think that it is degrading to a brands legitimacy by post pre-design template pics asking for feedback? Why not just ask personal friends for feedback? Personally, I enjoy the element of surprise and risk involved with keeping things a secret until released.

But in the end I guess if there is a particular place to do such a thing it would be in this forum.

Carry on.

THE VISIONARY IS YOU - www.minsct.com

Jul 08, 2012 @ 01:25
Is it just me or does anyone else think that it is degrading to a brands legitimacy by post pre-design template pics asking for feedback? Why not just ask personal friends for feedback? Personally, I enjoy the element of surprise and risk involved with keeping things a secret until released.

But in the end I guess if there is a particular place to do such a thing it would be in this forum.

Carry on.

i understand what you're saying but the ppl i ask basically have the same taste as me and i really want criticism from different perspectives.

http://www.dangerers.bigcartel.com

Jul 08, 2012 @ 01:38
Is it just me or does anyone else think that it is degrading to a brands legitimacy by post pre-design template pics asking for feedback? Why not just ask personal friends for feedback? Personally, I enjoy the element of surprise and risk involved with keeping things a secret until released.

But in the end I guess if there is a particular place to do such a thing it would be in this forum.

Carry on.


I agree completely. It lends more respect and legitimacy to a brand when the creator put enough belief in the product to print it. It's all perception I guess. to each his own

God Hates Lames

Jul 08, 2012 @ 02:58
Is it just me or does anyone else think that it is degrading to a brands legitimacy by post pre-design template pics asking for feedback? Why not just ask personal friends for feedback? Personally, I enjoy the element of surprise and risk involved with keeping things a secret until released.

But in the end I guess if there is a particular place to do such a thing it would be in this forum.

Carry on.


Cosign.

www.highwaysco.us -- for some fucking reason, you must use the www. idk why fml.

Jul 08, 2012 @ 06:32


Started my line 4 months ago. Shirts are being printed soon.

http://laroyaleclothing.tumblr.com
http://facebook.com/laroyaleclothing
http://laroyaleclothing.bigcartel.com







I appreciate any and all feedback.
Jul 08, 2012 @ 07:15
^ reminds me of acropolis.

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Jul 08, 2012 @ 08:35
^ reminds me of acropolis.


I've honestly had these ideas for several months and I just found out about Acropolis 2 weeks ago. But I can see where you're coming from.
Jul 08, 2012 @ 09:04
Is it just me or does anyone else think that it is degrading to a brands legitimacy by post pre-design template pics asking for feedback? Why not just ask personal friends for feedback? Personally, I enjoy the element of surprise and risk involved with keeping things a secret until released.

But in the end I guess if there is a particular place to do such a thing it would be in this forum.

Carry on.


I agree with you to some extent, but asking your friends for feedback on your brand is like asking your mom if you're handsome. If you want real feedback, as people who actually know what they're talking about.

City Limits - Fall 2012

Jul 08, 2012 @ 09:13
Ahh that's interesting, I just looked through Acropolis's Collections and it seems we have similar ideas.



Entitled: The Alps Allover.
We also plan: The Alps Pocket Tee.
Jul 08, 2012 @ 09:18
^ reminds me of acropolis.


I've honestly had these ideas for several months and I just found out about Acropolis 2 weeks ago. But I can see where you're coming from.


Sucks when that kind of stuff happens. Especially this day an age, where theres nothing new under the sun.

But lets be honest, It's a simple text knockout with a background. Its not that original and tons of people have done it, and will continue to do it. Not knocking your hustle at all, because an idea is simply just an idea, its all about how you execute it. So you can still make it work.

Your font on the hats/shirt seems weak. Using premade fonts is cool and easy and all, but sometimes taking it into Ai and moving things around lets you take it to the next level, and make it your own style.

edmflavor.com

Jul 08, 2012 @ 09:30
I really appreciate the tips and feedback, it means a lot to me.

The main goal I keep in mind is that I'm making clothes that I want to wear. And If a company has something similar, So be it. I designed these out of my own creativity. As a great being once said, "If you make it, they will come." So I'm not too worried about selling them.

But again my deepest Thanks.
Jul 08, 2012 @ 10:06
this fricken roman thing going on................... omg it makes me die inside

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