NDP
Post: 32
Join Date: May 2009
Location: Portland via Sacrame...
Compared to most upstart lines that are posted on forums, this really isn't all that bad.
You really need to look at the positioning of the 'A' and 'P' relative to the rest of the brand name in that first logo, as the spacing seems a bit off.
Also, I'd re-think the "Raising The Curve" positioning, as it doesn't exactly work as you likely intended. Might be better suited with a different tagline. Try and add a bit more depth and feel to some of the more 2D graphics too, as those come off slightly underdeveloped and bare. Overall, it's a good general direction compared to most initial starting points, but there's still a ton of strategy & positioning work to be figured out.
Lastly, UNDRCRWN did that *EXACT* Brotherhood tournament tee around 3 seasons ago.
