Let me get your opinions on the product, the site layout itself, and the content. Thanks.
www.thelegitimacy.com
www.thelegitimacy.com/blog
www.thelegitimacy.com/blog/shop
www.twitter.com/chrisLegitimacy
Dope website. I like the tank top, might have to cop one. Concept-wise, you 're heading in the right direction. But no hate, it seems like you're trying too hard to get on that elitist swag; the description on the flag shirt is...eh. Otherwise, keep it up, I like what you guys are doing.
edit: I took some time to read your blog. Wow, shit is dope. Contrary to what I said before, I'm actually really feelin your concept.
That tank is dope!!! I may have to cop one.
Dope website. I like the tank top, might have to cop one. Concept-wise, you 're heading in the right direction. But no hate, it seems like you're trying too hard to get on that elitist swag; the description on the flag shirt is...eh. Otherwise, keep it up, I like what you guys are doing.
edit: I took some time to read your blog. Wow, shit is dope. Contrary to what I said before, I'm actually really feelin your concept.
I want to see the world burn
you got talent and a future
just because someone tells you its shit, it doenst mean to stop it means
keep doing what you doing and you'll achieve what your looking for.
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Co-sign on the tee description. It's dope you have a message you're trying to convey but let the design speak for itself. Keep the descriptions concise (about 15 words or less)and a little ambiguous.
The website is dope though, keep it up son.
Edit:Try something like "Skull and bones are the new stars and bars. American flag design printed on classic tee." or some shit like that. Just an idea though.
you got talent and a future
just because someone tells you its shit, it doenst mean to stop it means
keep doing what you doing and you'll achieve what your looking for.
Site looks dope.. the layout and photos are quality
I like the t-shirt.
Oh shit. Makin' a come back. Where you been homie?
Z I;2886927']The site looks professionally made and has a good presence. However, the pictures of your apparel don't seem professional and presentable. I suggest you iron the shirts to look brand new. Some brands advertise their clothes with a wrinkled and worn look, but they can pull it off with good lighting, background etc. I hope you don't ship them out looking used.
As for the designs... I find them to be very bland. Simple designs are the safest route to go. Using bold colors and loud designs can scare away customers, but simple and neutral colored designs attracts many. Your designs are simple with the right colors, but the design itself seems tasteless in my opinion.
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Need to have a more direct route to get to the shop.
Items look good though,
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Lemme get that tank my brutha. Shits dope haha
Education is priceless bro. Glad your still doing it up. Get at me for a collabo in the future.
Barry
www.proverse.com
Like most here... The product looks good and so does the site. But I agree with Lyall's comment of having a more direct link to the shop. It took me a minute!
Keep doing your thing! When you release the headwear, hit me up so I can put on the UA blog!
Peace & Connect,
Nems
Also it's good to see you actually listening to feedback.