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March 15, 2013 @ 03:09 AM
werewxlf

Post: 6

Join Date: Mar 2013

So i'm just a dude from Kansas who is starting up a dream. I dont' expect to go big, but you know........



yes those are field marshals. rare


http://wxlfpack.bigcartel.com/ is the website.

tell me what you think. 
March 15, 2013 @ 03:17 AM
Ol English

Post: 315

Join Date: Dec 2012

Honest opinion.

1. Find a new model or just take pictures of the clothes itself.
2. The tee shirt is decent but the back print is way too big and loud.
3. Design is a little basic but still decent.

Again, I think it's best if you dont make the graphics too loud/big on a tee. Just doesnt look good imo.
Also, I would stop using one design to put on a tee, longsleeve and tank top... It kinda makes the design lose its.... exclusiveness if you get the idea.
Third, avoid using words like dope, swag, fresh, etc....
Lastly, you need to be more creative with your design. But make sure the design isn't loud/ugly/big.

Good luck.
March 15, 2013 @ 03:18 AM
EEK A LURKER

Post: 1216

Join Date: Nov 2012


.wa do dem.

March 15, 2013 @ 03:21 AM
werewxlf

Post: 6

Join Date: Mar 2013

Honest opinion.

1. Find a new model or just take pictures of the clothes itself.
2. The tee shirt is decent but the back print is way too big and loud.
3. Design is a little basic but still decent.

Again, I think it's best if you dont make the graphics too loud/big on a tee. Just doesnt look good imo.
Also, I would stop using one design to put on a tee, longsleeve and tank top... It kinda makes the design lose its.... exclusiveness if you get the idea.
Third, avoid using words like dope, swag, fresh, etc....
Lastly, you need to be more creative with your design. But make sure the design isn't loud/ugly/big.

Good luck.
I truly appreciate the feedback. it means a lot and thank you for not being a downright asshole about it. Thank you. 
March 15, 2013 @ 03:24 AM
Ol English

Post: 315

Join Date: Dec 2012

No problem. You can get some more feedback here:

http://hypebeast.com/forums/general-fashion-discussion/154829/page/320#3928463
March 17, 2013 @ 05:51 PM
SpacemaneNoir

Post: 71

Join Date: May 2012

Aye breh thats a nice lil start dont let these lame ducks stop your grind^...
if you aren't a artist I would commission a artist to do a Identifiable symbol I.E. k-9 tooth, wolf cub, broken leash(untamed).
like the clean look. Keep pushing and add to your arsenal!!! Edit: my bad homie I didnt see your avi. that logo om the sleeve near the sleeve's wrist would have been nice branding hit. and maybe do a colored X in the O or Wolf in color and a black X.
March 19, 2013 @ 09:08 AM
werewxlf

Post: 6

Join Date: Mar 2013

Aye breh thats a nice lil start dont let these lame ducks stop your grind^...
if you aren't a artist I would commission a artist to do a Identifiable symbol I.E. k-9 tooth, wolf cub, broken leash(untamed).
like the clean look. Keep pushing and add to your arsenal!!! Edit: my bad homie I didnt see your avi. that logo om the sleeve near the sleeve's wrist would have been nice branding hit. and maybe do a colored X in the O or Wolf in color and a black X.
Thanks man. I really appreciate the feedback. I actually have another logo


Was thinking of throwing this just on a black tank top, with gold lettering.
March 19, 2013 @ 12:05 PM
werewxlf

Post: 6

Join Date: Mar 2013



Also just going to put this on a tshirt, maybe pocket? I dunno yet. 

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