recent designs - thoughts?

August 12, 2013 @ 18:45:57 PM
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(Invalid img)here's some recent designs I've been working on









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August 13, 2013 @ 00:05:43 AM
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What's the concept behind the designs?
August 13, 2013 @ 16:00:57 PM
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What's the concept behind the designs?
The first 4 represent the 4 pillars of the US I think need to take a step back; Monroe represents fame and celebrity, Hithcock represents the fear and paranoia, Kennedy represents the politics and Brando represents the attitude

The next four just represent classic eras of entertainment, sport and celebrity, which I hope will help define a website I am working on

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August 13, 2013 @ 17:12:26 PM
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I really like the way the images look. I am not the hugest fan of the text in your last 4. Im sure you can work with this to make it fall in place a little better. But still really cool ideas, the first 4 would look great framed and put together.
August 13, 2013 @ 21:10:58 PM
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I think the Hitchcock photo is the strongest of the original series because there's something eerie and great about it.  Really nice!

Like in the previous post, the last four look like complete after thoughts that are done in the same visual aesthetics and have type slapped on it.  I think it would be cool if you found images/sports moments that share the same representation of the original four in the series.

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August 15, 2013 @ 16:10:28 PM
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"I really like the way the images look. I am not the hugest fan of the text in your last 4. Im sure you can work with this to make it fall in place a little better. But still really cool ideas, the first 4 would look great framed and put together."

@tehbakery thanks for the input! I'm definitely going to work on the text for the last few ones as I pretty much did just slap it on there. I really want to get the first four framed together ASAP


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"I think the Hitchcock photo is the strongest of the original series because there's something eerie and great about it.  Really nice!

Like in the previous post, the last four look like complete after thoughts that are done in the same visual aesthetics and have type slapped on it.  I think it would be cool if you found images/sports moments that share the same representation of the original four in the series."

@TheyCallMeVince the hitchcock one is my favorite too, i did something right with the curves I think I just can't remember what ! I need to look into that and yea the text wasn't too good - I'm going to post some new stuff soon thanks! 

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August 20, 2013 @ 16:45:59 PM
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What did you design here? You didn't take the photos and the type is just added without much care.
I worked on the first four pictures for over a year, so the text wasn't "just added without much care" but you're right I didn't take the pictures; I scanned them and I didn't design much, but together they all work together

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August 24, 2013 @ 04:49:56 AM
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I liked Hitchcock. And the message is just even more appealing

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August 24, 2013 @ 19:03:19 PM
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Try working on your texts, black doesn't look good with those pics and so does the font. 
September 14, 2013 @ 17:49:47 PM
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Yeah cant read the type
September 15, 2013 @ 00:39:19 AM
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- Switch the font type to something with less accents and more "stable"
- Change the font color to White
- Drop shadow around the font when necessary
- Close the vertical gaps between the words

I think these things will really clean it up!

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September 19, 2013 @ 18:04:05 PM
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- Switch the font type to something with less accents and more "stable"
- Change the font color to White
- Drop shadow around the font when necessary
- Close the vertical gaps between the words

I think these things will really clean it up!
thanks a lot for that input!

New designs coming soon

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September 20, 2013 @ 02:04:47 AM
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(Invalid img)here's some recent designs I've been working on









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why they all white? 

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September 24, 2013 @ 01:32:57 AM
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- Switch the font type to something with less accents and more "stable"
- Change the font color to White
- Drop shadow around the font when necessary
- Close the vertical gaps between the words

I think these things will really clean it up!
thanks a lot for that input!

New designs coming soon
Not a problem! Look forward to seeing them.

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October 21, 2013 @ 05:43:05 AM
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Biggest thing that needs to change is the font
The pictures themselves have that sick vintage feel though so keep doing your thing
October 28, 2013 @ 12:44:15 PM
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what are these lenticular?
November 04, 2013 @ 23:36:13 PM
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Hey everyone it's been a couple months and I appreciate everyone who posted in this thread- since I last posted I've been working on a new project "25ONLINE" that will embody the same characteristics and strategies as related to the original designs in this thread. "25ONLINE" will be an online magazine dedicated to satirizing, editorializing and blogging about our American culture categorized into three subject areas: news, entertainment and society. Along with that - my online brands "BUGS WITH ME" is all about creating dope visuals/websites for creatives and entrepreneurs. 

Here's a look into the beginnings of "25ONLINE"  http://twenty5online.com/





and I am still working on the text for my "BUGS WITH ME" images, but here's a different take on my original concept, any criticism is very appreciated 


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November 13, 2013 @ 01:20:24 AM
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love // hate // thoughts???

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