I've created a few T-Shirt designs and I just wanted to get feedback on how they look and what I have to do to make them look better. I'm open to any comments/criticism. I'm just going to try and get better. DVNE which you will see in a lot of the designs stands for Divine.
This first design I see going on the pocket of pocket tees:
They are not too bad, the design does have an obscure minimaist quality that is good. But I am not so big on the camouflage. The cross design for women is not bad either. Would be helpful to see them on actual shirts, as the colour and size are important. I would go big for both designs. Good luck!
To me the camo one is busy and all over the place. The cross/floral design doesn't seem strong to me. I get confused looking at it. The cross makes sense since it references divine but the image of the flower seems random. On another note why not write divine instead of dvne in the designs?