Need Feedback On T-Shirt Designs

July 23, 2013 @ 02:46:58
I've created a few T-Shirt designs and I just wanted to get feedback on how they look and what I have to do to make them look better. I'm open to any comments/criticism. I'm just going to try and get better. DVNE which you will see in a lot of the designs stands for Divine. (Invalid img)

This first design I see going on the pocket of pocket tees:

This second design I could see going on racerback tanks/crop tops for girls:
July 23, 2013 @ 12:49:53
They are not too bad, the design does have an obscure minimaist quality that is good. But I am not so big on the camouflage. The cross design for women is not bad either. Would be helpful to see them on actual shirts, as the colour and size are important. I would go big for both designs. Good luck!
July 24, 2013 @ 00:59:03
To me the camo one is busy and all over the place.
The cross/floral design doesn't seem strong to me. I get confused looking at it. The cross makes sense since it references divine but the image of the flower seems random.
On another note why not write divine instead of dvne in the designs?
July 25, 2013 @ 02:53:21
Camo look like those Stussy N1 thing but its not. Maybe its just me probly just me
the floral im lost at first, then when I read its DVNE then I got it might wanna rework it just my 2cents
July 26, 2013 @ 03:24:17
liking the cross w/ floral more than the camo. more classy. suits the name better. ya feelz? smokeyface 

bitch, dont kill my vibe...

July 28, 2013 @ 05:30:12
Thanks everyone for the feedback! So I have decided to drop the camo design for now and work on new ones.

The floral cross has been redone and the word "DIVINE" has been spelled out for people to actually know what the word means instead of abbreviating it "DVNE".

I also started on a new design which consist of a Hawaiian style floral within a circle. I can see it going in the middle of the shirt.

Appreciate all feedback and criticism!
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