February 14, 2007 @ 08:17 PM
JADC

Post: 11

Join Date: Dec 2006

Location: Union,NJ

POST SUM OF UR PIECES TOO

i18.photobucket.com/albums/b120/luisfanlo/andresgraffitti-1.jpg

Please rate nd give sum tips
February 14, 2007 @ 08:17 PM
Leumas

Post: 1915

Join Date: Nov 2006

Location: los - man - yyz

average but way better than i can do
February 14, 2007 @ 08:35 PM
Chris

Post: 1662

Join Date: Aug 2006

Location: Washington

Wack.
February 14, 2007 @ 08:49 PM
AfrocentricPatrick

Post: 2375

Join Date: Aug 2006

Location: 910 side of thangs,...

-5/10


hahhaha at first i was like "why did he give him a 5/10?" The - makes it much more accurate.
February 14, 2007 @ 08:56 PM
KICKROCKS

Post: 878

Join Date: Jan 2007

Location: 8(31)0

:'[
February 14, 2007 @ 09:08 PM
illy

Post: 1969

Join Date: Aug 2006

Location: sandiegocaliforniaba...

lol at -5/10
alright so a couple reasons why i think its lacking::
arrows=overdone outplayed and maaaaaad cliche. the letter form is seriously under developed. i wouldnt even dare to post my stuff on hb...you get knocked down reeeeeeeeal quick if you're a toy.
February 14, 2007 @ 09:10 PM
T.B.E.L

Post: 2436

Join Date: Jul 2006

Location: Seattle

LOL @ using crayons. Clean up your 3D too, its whack.
February 14, 2007 @ 10:35 PM
rayshiest

Post: 1093

Join Date: Sep 2006

Location: brownsville brooklyn

omfg you suck.

i dont even write but i chill wit some big leagues in NYC..

February 14, 2007 @ 10:42 PM
LOCHNESS

Post: 1902

Join Date: Jul 2006

Location: Dirty New Jersey

Post up in Black Book thread and get some advice man, you need a lot of work but youve got some decent ideas
February 15, 2007 @ 12:18 AM
yomari

Post: 344

Join Date: Apr 2006

toy, work on simples dont try to go all out, work on ur letter struture , loose the arrows, the 3d and dont worry about colors and highlights for now just work on ur throwies and handstyles, do block letters for practice
February 15, 2007 @ 12:44 AM
HARTY

Post: 1224

Join Date: Jan 2007

Location: NJ

boring.

is that color pencil.
February 16, 2007 @ 02:27 PM
Near_OneR

Post: 23

Join Date: Aug 2006

keep it on paper for awhile...
February 16, 2007 @ 03:50 PM
newera84

Post: 96

Join Date: Feb 2006

Location: northern ca

keep it on paper for awhile...


+1
February 17, 2007 @ 03:13 PM
Third Eye Jedi

Post: 1296

Join Date: Jul 2006

Location: N/A

average but way better than i can do


Wow you consider that avarage??suprised Low standards i guess..
February 18, 2007 @ 12:23 AM
nothx

Post: 21

Join Date: Aug 2006

Location: sunnyago

try harder arts universal everyone needs to start somewhere
February 23, 2007 @ 06:23 PM
FxJOSEPHxF

Post: 190

Join Date: Dec 2006

Location: Bay Area Tropics

The 3-D should be on one sided. Making it look more real.
February 24, 2007 @ 02:21 AM
skorone

Post: 262

Join Date: Jan 2007

Location: san diego

damn you guys are harsh , but he did ask . not that great . practice and start with basic shit . it always trips me out when i see toys commin up and they try to go all wildstyle with 3-D and crazy fillins??

just do some throw-ups , basic block letters an lose all those arrows fo sure.

But at least you are trying you have to start somewhere. if you are feeln it then keep it up . thats what its all about . Fu#K THE REST!
February 25, 2007 @ 12:07 AM
Makepeace

Post: 1665

Join Date: May 2006

Location: New York

It is something in the making dude, the lettering is off but the shading and coloring is fine.Your not too much of a toy but I bet you can do alot better than this!

Bless.

March 2, 2007 @ 05:50 PM
mad digits

Post: 60

Join Date: Aug 2006

holy shit that is terrible.

Instead of trying to do something which you are never going to accomplish, and that looks toy anyway, focus on straight letters. Can you draw the letters on your keyboard (but obviously make them bolder so there is more form to the letters)?

You need to tone it down about 400%. You are doing what all toys do when they start and that is trying to have this crazy style with arrows and bits flying everywhere. You will never be able to do that shit if you cant do a simple straight letter.
March 5, 2007 @ 10:29 AM
Enemy

Post: 9

Join Date: Mar 2007

Wack.

Very
March 8, 2007 @ 06:27 PM
constrictor02

Post: 63

Join Date: Nov 2006

shits ridiculous man ill wipe my ass wit it

Please login first to reply.
Back To Top