Thank you for the constructive criticism there.I think the sharpies ruined the piece because it had very thin lines before but the sharpie made them fat.Are you saying I need to make my work more legible though?Because I thought the point of it was to make it almost unreadable.And I have actually gotten my work out there but not very much.I've also done a few colored pieces on a local legal wall but this is a blackbook thread so I'll leave it.And I've still got lots of room for improvement as I only started drawing pieces a year ago(at the age of 13)and I only started painting a couple of months ago.Thanks for the comments.
The point of it is to get your name out there. Consider..you can't really get your name out there if nobody can see what you're trying to write, right?
Most it'll ever be is "Oh, it's that guy who writes stuff we can't read". NO INSULT AT ALL, but if you look at stuff like this..
You can SEE the letters. Says GEMS. Sometimes, you still can't see it, but people will see some points about it, sometimes see the name. And then, if they see another one, they'll go, oh hey, that's that other guy I saw down the street.
It pretty much all comes down to legibility. Getting up isn't gonna work if nobody can read what you're doing, right?