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December 9, 2013 @ 03:30 AM
nat turner

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Join Date: Jul 2008

Here's a logo I made for myself. thoughts? improvements?

One is just a plain on white. the other is just laid over a random background.

The third one has the word photography spread out to the end of the D





http://pureandgood.tumblr.com/ IG: thevictoryspeech

December 9, 2013 @ 08:09 AM
chief

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Join Date: Feb 2008

Location: WA

I like the simplicity of it. is it just the lettering itself or were you wanting to incorporate a background so it's just always a rectangular image?

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December 9, 2013 @ 08:47 AM
gpatr0n

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Join Date: Nov 2013

Definitely like it better over the white, makes the letters pop nice. 
December 9, 2013 @ 10:16 AM
nat turner

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Join Date: Jul 2008

I like the simplicity of it. is it just the lettering itself or were you wanting to incorporate a background so it's just always a rectangular image?
It's just the lettering. i might put it over an image every now and then but mostly it will stand alone. thanks for the feedback yall

http://pureandgood.tumblr.com/ IG: thevictoryspeech

December 10, 2013 @ 02:45 AM
Black Jew

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Location: Los Angeles

why does the word "photography" stop at the curve of the D?
I'd like to see "photography" tracked all the way to where the D ends.
December 10, 2013 @ 02:46 AM
Black Jew

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Location: Los Angeles

also, is it "liD photography" or "HD photography"?
December 10, 2013 @ 03:01 AM
nat turner

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also, is it "liD photography" or "HD photography"?
it's lid (LID) photography. I'll try spreading the photography out further. thanks

http://pureandgood.tumblr.com/ IG: thevictoryspeech

December 10, 2013 @ 06:42 AM
Black Jew

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Location: Los Angeles

for sure fam.

looks good.
I think it looks a little more cohesive this way, like its all in a rectangular box.
which one are you feeling more though? you are the designer.
December 10, 2013 @ 10:10 AM
GDChoi

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clea cut professional
December 10, 2013 @ 02:04 PM
nat turner

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Join Date: Jul 2008

for sure fam.

looks good.
I think it looks a little more cohesive this way, like its all in a rectangular box.
which one are you feeling more though? you are the designer.
i like the "lid"
but the font of photography isn't all that pleasing to me. maybe i need to resize it or change the font

http://pureandgood.tumblr.com/ IG: thevictoryspeech

December 12, 2013 @ 07:46 AM
ak

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Imagine how "photography" is going to look when you put that on a business card. Tiny as hell, nobody is going to be able to read it. My suggestion is lose the photography part all together and just stick with liD. 

Somethings to consider
-lower case L and lower case i are sort of confusing to read when they're next to each other that tightly. 

-see how this would look with more negative space around it, think about how much negative space you'll need for it to really "work" because having a logo that's too close to other things might take away from that logo.

-Try see how it would look on black with white text and apply what I said above. (Just to see how it'll turn out, sometimes reversing the type looks cool)
December 12, 2013 @ 08:09 AM
heyitzalex

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The last one looks good, but I cant see the top 2

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