June 24, 2013 @ 04:17 AM

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Join Date: Apr 2009

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June 26, 2013 @ 04:39 PM

Post: 23

Join Date: May 2013

Location: upstate,NY

very cool concept and storytelling - you fit a lot in and it flowed nicely together, the scripted could've been a little more focused though and maybe with more direct cut scenes. I was confused at some parts until I figured out what was happening, especially when they were in the kitchen and I wasn't sure who the other guy was, who turned out to the main character's brother or even where they were at first. 

I liked it tho, I did find myself anticipating the fight scene and was entertained throughout. This is definitely a good start to something 


July 17, 2013 @ 06:07 PM

Post: 36

Join Date: Dec 2012

yeah man i liked it smile
July 18, 2013 @ 02:02 AM

Post: 251

Join Date: Mar 2013

Location: 510

Definitely got glued on the story man. You could've added some background instrumentals (not talking about those tacky hip hop instrumentals either) to seem the cuts on the scenes a bit better. Aside that, really Good shit man. cool

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August 17, 2013 @ 10:41 PM

Post: 6

Join Date: Aug 2013

Location: Austin, TX

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Dude this different. Really good.

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