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big1221baller
06-22-2006, 12:43 PM
Put these on the Critiqueing post on page 2 but didnt get any replys what do guys think
http://images6.theimagehosting.com/tshirt3.41f.jpg (http://www.theimagehosting.com)
http://images6.theimagehosting.com/Tshirt2.2cb.jpg (http://www.theimagehosting.com)
http://images6.theimagehosting.com/Tshirt1.jpg (http://www.theimagehosting.com)
Am workin on these for a label MPg. Its part of my art n design folio that I have to work on this summer. Any comments are welcome at 17 I have along way to go.

P.s i know these need some adjustments
ice grillz
06-22-2006, 02:49 PM
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jimmaye
06-22-2006, 03:21 PM
the characters look bapeish.
DUM
06-22-2006, 03:23 PM
^people say that way too much.
ToddeFresh
06-22-2006, 03:43 PM
way too much, shit looks kawsish tho:)
dblockdosmil
06-22-2006, 03:51 PM
it looks kaws wit da X's
DUM
06-22-2006, 04:14 PM
Not even that imo..the X's have been in cartoons forever.
I'm broke
06-22-2006, 04:25 PM
Hahaha.. I think Bugs Bunny had x's on his eyes in the 30's before KAWS was born.
preshusQD
06-22-2006, 05:03 PM
the characters look bapeish.

yea they do.
BigBoohi
06-22-2006, 08:02 PM
no disrespect.
they remind me of yahoo instant messenger emoticons.
kankurou
06-22-2006, 08:04 PM
it looks like you spent 10 minutes on that design
adamthegreat
06-22-2006, 10:43 PM
I like the 2nd and 3rd one.
innovazn
06-22-2006, 10:51 PM
weak
jimmaye
06-22-2006, 11:42 PM
^people say that way too much.

come on man, you gotta admit. the shit does look like bape kinda.
thelion1856
06-23-2006, 12:19 AM
they look plane & shitty, nothing that would standout. just another shirt design, come up with something dope.
jimmaye
06-23-2006, 03:52 AM
they look plane & shitty, nothing that would standout. just another shirt design, come up with something dope.

lol...coming up with something dope is easier said than done. dude said that shit like its easy.
questioner
06-23-2006, 06:47 AM
get real ideas and stop fooling around with ilustrator.
big1221baller
06-24-2006, 08:05 AM
ok spose you could say they look bapeish thats because i was slightly influenced by kaws cartoons. People generally like the designs but as i said they havnt been printed to T and there in the first stage of development. i still have a long way to go, especially when yeh i know im not a designer, im 17 and working on an art project some peeps need to lighten up. But thanks to those who gave me some constructive feedback instead of just taking thier mouth for a walk down shit lane.
DUM
06-24-2006, 01:25 PM
get real ideas and stop fooling around with ilustrator.
No Illustrator? Then how should he make it?
tradebark
06-24-2006, 01:58 PM
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