help a new designer out!

[yoonique]

hey guys, i starting up a shirt business after i finish high school. i started silk screening/designing like 6 months ago! help me out by giving me some feedback! thanks!

http://www.myspace.com/yooniqueclothing

[ciph$]

I don't see any pictures and your name looks like a 12 year old Korean girl's screename.

[Jack]

Your designs and tee's are wack

[ice grillz]

I don't see any pictures and your name looks like a 12 year old Korean girl's screename.


HAHAHAHA.

[etcetera_juda]

Your designs and tee's are wack
kind of harsh but for the most part i agree

[Jack]

kind of harsh but for the most part i agree

Yeah haha I can be a bastard sometimes, but I stand my statement. The shirts are boring and look like they could be sold at a gift shop in a museum. Seriously do you know of any streetwearheads that would rock those shirts?

[kennmon]

bwahahah go to college.

[Jack]

I feel bad about being a dick all the time, so I'll give you some advice.

Make the design more intricate and incorporate more stylistic elements into your design.

I can't say much more without confusing myself but overall make the shirt more interesting than just a spiral galaxy shape with a box behind it.

[Tronics]

I dont get it sometimes.

first off your brand logo looks like evian entering the street wear game. Wack!

just give it a rest fam, theres enough wack people out there you can all fight amongst yourselves. lol. Le messi will be judge. lol.

[LifeLike]

Yuck?

[ballday]

Hello,

on behalf of the hypebeastrz welcome to the threads...
if you want some advice on how to make ur designs look better,
you have to ask DUM to post them for you.
if you read his thread there are plenty of people that are more than happy to give out tips ...but only to certain people.

good luck.:)

[ballday]

btw....that shit is kinda wack

[eyes]

back to the drawing boards.

[DUM]

Hello,

on behalf of the hypebeastrz welcome to the threads...
if you want some advice on how to make ur designs look better,
you have to ask DUM to post them for you.
if you read his thread there are plenty of people that are more than happy to give out tips ...but only to certain people.

good luck.:)

Wow, I'm sorry people like my stuff. I've definitely posted things that people didn't like..and they told me.

[barrow]

Wow, I'm sorry people like my stuff. I've definitely posted things that people didn't like..and they told me.

I think the point he was trying to make is that someone a lot of people know like you receives constructive criticism on their designs, as opposed to someone with 0 posts who won't really receive any feedbakc they can work with.

I partly agree with that, but there are enough examples of kids receiving constructive criticism that it's worth asking for feedback. Also, it's not your fault Jermaine that you're more likely to receieve criticism than someone nobody knows, but that's how things work.

[ballday]

not talkin bout like ..i dont like this shyt either.
im talkin bout info. help. how to improve. advice

some threads are fullll of it.

but it would be cool if new people could post stuff through you and see how many pages of positive feedback and help they would get.

[ballday]

I think the point he was trying to make is that someone a lot of people know like you receives constructive criticism on their designs, as opposed to someone with 0 posts who won't really receive any feedbakc they can work with.

I partly agree with that, but there are enough examples of kids receiving constructive criticism that it's worth asking for feedback. Also, it's not your fault Jermaine that you're more likely to receieve criticism than someone nobody knows, but that's how things work.

exactly

[DUM]

Yeah, he was going through the bamf thread saying that my designs sucked and people only liked them because I was DUM.

Not everyone who posted designs gets flamed. Invasion got pretty good feedback when he posted his, and he had no posts before that I don't think. Gone Corporate back when it was Baked Fresh, he got good feedback. Yuljo never got flamed for his stuff.

[DUM]

'that shit is kinda wack' isn't very helpful.

And yeah, I think we should try and help the people that are posting designs..give them constructive criticism. Also, most of the stuff posted in the design critique thread fairs better than when posted alone...they actually get critiques.

[ballday]

Yeah, he was going through the bamf thread saying that my designs sucked and people only liked them because I was DUM.

Not everyone who posted designs gets flamed. Invasion got pretty good feedback when he posted his, and he had no posts before that I don't think. Gone Corporate back when it was Baked Fresh, he got good feedback. Yuljo never got flamed for his stuff.

thats not true..i didnt say it sucked..
ur trying to make it seem like im just hating on you cuz people in here like you
thats not the case..sometimes it seems like this forum is like some exclusive club where only the popular peeps get real answers.

but whatever..it is what it is

i know ..sounds stupid and high schoolish...ill stop.

[matth]

Hello,

on behalf of the hypebeastrz welcome to the threads...
if you want some advice on how to make ur designs look better,
you have to ask DUM to post them for you.
if you read his thread there are plenty of people that are more than happy to give out tips ...but only to certain people.

good luck.:)
lmao

[persia]

yoo - go to college, drink a lot, do drugs, fight, loose some teeth, meet chicks and then, after four years of personal growth, if your still down, then try and get into the rag game. Your graphic are void of emotion. Best of luck.